do you see what i see? no, you don't, never cared
you don't know about waves and the sea, you do not feel the air
and it's probably better you don't
because coming with good is the bad, these are thoughts that i wrote
all emotion, all tears, smiles here, there and sometimes
a love that did leave me behind or a sunrise
i never had time for what falls in between
you see, that's where you live and you never will leave
come with me if you want, heaven waits for my soul
heaven tastes me, it bathed me in truth, so let's let this be known
i am love, i am smiles and cries
i am ends of the spectrum, your world is inside
© 2004
this is amazing ... truly ... the last stanza seems to surpass the first two ... the last two lines of the entire poem seem to sum up so much that is universal, and yet is unique for each of us ... i do wish i had your way with words ...
Posted 5/24/2004 12:21 AM by gods_baby_angel
I like it. You think it's going to be a cliche at first, an angst-ridden rant; but then it comes out as actual artistry. Kudos.
Posted 5/24/2004 10:10 PM by deviant_beauty
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