Goodnight To The Sun

i'm breathing and i'm seeing clearly such things
that i never believed i would see and with wings
built of truth i do fly, i do soar, watch me go
i set fire to past, ashes fall down below

i have grown and i've learned not to care, i do dare
death and time, i will tear them apart, simple rhymes
simple minds know me not, they forgot that they never remembered
they think not and they do not drink, rot, cut, sever

whatever does tear them to pieces
i have but love in my heart, it does bleed
and it sees what is good and what needs to be done
i'm the sky when the moon says goodnight to the sun
© 2004

"i have grown and i've learned not to care, i do dare

death and time, i will tear them apart"

Gorgeous...
Posted 8/19/2004 3:55 AM by secrets_unfolded

"i have grown and i've learned not to care, i do dare death and time, i will tear them apart, simple rhymes simple minds know me not, they forgot"

"i have but love in my heart, it does bleed

and it sees what is good and what needs to be done i'm the sky when the moon says goodnight to the sun"

My fav parts I love it it's beautiful like your mind heart soul body smile eyes i one word like YOU
Posted 8/19/2004 4:28 AM by M1ZZUND3RZT00D

hey thanks for wishin me happy birthday...i dont even know you and you did that for me. thanks. by the way your poetry is pretty good. holla at me. o n e -traci-
Posted 8/19/2004 3:33 PM by Iris_Paradise85

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Posted 8/20/2004 11:01 AM by Nightdust